Wednesday, April 1, 2015

The Dependence on Technology
        The world of technology is advancing with each passing day. Whether vehicles or cellular devices, corporations strive to put out a product with the latest technology to enhance peoples’ lives. People can now connect with their loved ones from another part of the world through a small screen. The advancements in medical technology has saved lives and allowed medical professionals to detect and treat illnesses quicker and more efficiently than ever before. There are cars that could now parallel park itself. The advantages of technology are numerous, and at times, technology is a necessity, yet like a drug, too much of anything can be dangerous. Technology controls who people are. Individuals wait like robots until their device lets them know what they will end up thinking and talking about that day. People have lost the sense of reality because they are living their lives through technology. These devices take away the things that make everybody human. The dependence on technology has gone too far.
        Professor at Columbia Law School and frequent writer for The New Yorker, Tim Wu speaks in his article, As Technology Gets Better, Will Society Get Worse?, of the hard working people of the Oji-Cree (Wu 1). Wu describes how their evolution in technology has been extremely beneficial, but it has also introduced them to many social issues (Wu 2). The Oji-Cree society must deal with issues of “idleness, alcoholism, drug addiction, and suicide” (Wu 2). This is an exact representation of American society. Americans live their lives through their technology until they set down their devices for one second and realize that their reality is nothing like their “digital lives”. That is when those social issues will arise. People feel alone or depressed which can lead to the problems of idleness, drug and alcohol issues, and suicide. The dependence on technology is too great, to the point where humans prefer a relationship with their new cell phones or laptops rather than developing a relationship with their fellow human beings.
        There is no doubt that the evolution of technology benefits society tremendously. It is a necessity when technology can be used to save a life. When it can assist people with disabilities, protect the military, or handle hazardous materials, then technology is proven necessary (Faigley, Selzer 436). Society needs technology to survive at times. Everyday, technology helps people at their jobs or students at school. But when it is used for, as Wu puts it, “self-evolution,” that is when a person begins to have social problems and allows technology to control them.
        The dependence on technology manipulates people and takes away from what makes people human. As writer and author Nicholas Carr writes in his Atlantic article, “My mind now expects to take in information the way the Net distributes it” (Carr 2). People want to get answers quickly, that is of the utmost importance. No longer can humans take in a big piece of information without dissecting it into smaller pieces, and then skimming through it to find what they want. Technology is continuing to control society and the way people think.
        To be human is to interact directly with another person. It is to experience one’s reality in its truest form. Human nature is about genuine relationships and cooperating with one another. It is about putting forth effort to resolve an issue or to gain knowledge. That is what makes people human, but technology is replacing these elements. With the touch of a button, an answer is provided to any question. Individuals can interact with others that they will never meet in their lives. Technology provides a way for people to live the life that they truly desire, making humans anti-social robots.

        Society can no longer live life without technology. People’s thoughts and compassion for one another is no longer enough to fulfill their lives. The dependence on technology in today’s world has grown too strong. With less dependency on devices, people can communicate and build relationships that will improve social issues and emotional health. It is the result of human minds and collaboration that has led to the advancements of technology, so there is nothing that people cannot overcome. Technology is at times necessary, but it is what makes people human that is a requirement for society. 
 

6 comments:

  1. Your argument was very stronger and you included both sides of the issue, which helped out your argument, It is true that people no longer are satisfied with the compassion and thoughts of one another. Your introduction paragraph showed both perspectives and really grab the audience attention with he examples of technology that we see all around. By giving quotes from the articles , it better helped you support you argument.

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  2. You gave a lot of quotes from the articles, which is beneficial because it helps make your argument stronger. It was great that you included both side of the issue. It helped out balanced your argument and show both sides. Your introduction had all the required elements in a proper argumentive essay. Overall, your essay was very logical.

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  3. It's true that society is becoming more and more dependent on pieces of metal just to make our lives easier. Your argument had plenty of examples to back up your statements. Where you state "Technology provides a way for people to live the life that they truly desire, making humans anti-social robots." is so true because everywhere you walk you're going to see everyone glaring down at their phone even when other people are around them.

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  4. The argument was a very persuasive argument were you balanced the positive and negatives of technology evenly. Your first paragrapgh was well written, it provided your audience your overall tone torwards technology. However you have mentioned Carrs and wu's purpose of writing their articles and their overall tone torwards tehnology to see pathos and ethos in your essay. Other than that the essay was well structured and written

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  5. Technology is definitely saving lives and helping out in the military. Many people tend to focus on technology as just smartphones and computers. Stating these points can actually make the reader really think about it. Without having it, the world would be losing more lives because they wouldn't have the quick access to getting what they need done. When it comes down to thinking about how it isn't beneficial, "the dependence on technology manipulates people and takes away from what makes people human," it is definitely controlling our lives.

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  6. Human qualities are at risk with technology. Nicholas Carr aslo mentions in his article that technology has evolved human genetics. Our brains are adapting to the fast paced world that technology has created by poping up tabs in a matter of seconds and filtering infromation for us. Humasn breeds inpatience,and as the blog suggests, causes depression.

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